Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Daily blog post

As we were slowly moving with the traffic if saw a sight that I wasn't familiar with. I could see smoky grey clouds the kept on rising. I was clueless as a snail. The traffic wasn't moving. I toted my horn twice and there was no response. I poked my head out the window for a better look at the road ahead. I saw the smoke all around me and very quickly the thick cloud filled my lungs and I was gasping for air. I quickly jumped back inside and put up my window. I could see nothing.

I heard the wildlife screaming in the distance. I was confused with all the smoke. I unfoged the windscreen and right in front of me was hundreds of factory chimneys. I could slowly hear the chimneys bubbling in the distance. I heard people yelling at each other like the smoke was some sort of drug. The traffic started to move again and I scary sound was getting closer and closer and closer.


1 comment:

  1. I Like it but to all good pieces of work there is something wrong.
    I can not see the picture and the story is very basic But I do like it and your smiley
    Is great.

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